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Old 05-01-04, 04:22 PM   #12
Shadows edge
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You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]
no. just no.
Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]
no.
Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
no.
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]
why is this here?
Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]
could have done a lot better, first line sucked
Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]
at least you tried a meta here. but it was still no good.


fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,
ok personal, could have done better with the concept. the second line sucked
so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,
ok.. this is just weak.
this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,
terrible.
you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,
this is retarded
Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability
two thumbs down.

well, both verses totaly and utterly lacked any good punches, but the second at least had a personal, so give the battle to revel.
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