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Old 05-01-04, 04:53 PM   #15
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breakdown:

relic:

You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]
^^ok opener could have been better 6/10
Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]
^^more filler than punch 4/10
Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]
^^ good punch no need for the 3rd line tho 7/10
Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]
^^good punch original 6/10
Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]
^^ ok finisher nothing to great 6/10

overall: 29/50

revell:

fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,
^^ played punch just worded different 4/10
so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,
^^ok punch nothing too great 5/10
this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,
^^filler ass punch nothing at all...nice try for wordplay 5/10
you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,
^^ok punch "doube U" line is played tho 6/10
Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability
^^ good finisher best bar in this verse 8/10

overall: 28/50

good verses from both...relic u need to elevate a lil and revell u need to elevate a lil bit more use more original punches vote: relic

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