This will be short and sweet so sit back and *Listen*
Cause after this shit ur gonna have Body Parts *Missen*
blah
Ima come at you with the heat of my Lyrical *Explosion*
Ill leave u at the Mic ripped and shredded from Lyrical *Erosion*
erosion doesn't leave people ripped and shredded.
Ill hit you hard then Eminem with Explicit *Content*
Ur brains gonna try and think but this flow is all that will *Haunt-It*
i like the concept, but the first line sucked and you could have hit harder
These rhymes are deadly they'll rip ur scalp off like an *Indian*
Punches hitten you so hard you won be able to Breathe *Agian*
the rhyme is a bit poor... the word is spellied again not agian, poor punch
Kid ima knock u were u belong the bottom of the *Barrel*
This hits you harder then the Comedic acts of Actor Will *Farrel*
harder than the comedic acts? makes no sense.
I guess I just gave you a True Reality *Check*
Dont worry about evan Postin just go practice and get a Mic *Check*
um... dont rhyme a word with itself. and this just sucked.



Like a handless boxer you can’t possibly win because you have no punches/
Cant read the Rulez?? you battling is a contradiction like fat Bitches doin crunches/
stretched, ok personal but could have been harder, the first line better but should have put it elsewhere
Kid I'm so charming, make yo heart-switch, and make you admire my speech/
I throw punches like Tyson delivering hard-hits like Kanya West kid go WIRE-ya-TEETH/
bleh
Should I be strapping a Tek? its just the net, fuck this faggot forget it/
Flex a Forty-Five Faggot azz Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
i like the wordplay kinda... ok punch
U'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel/
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem but u couldnt compete on that level/
nice multi, the punch is pretty decent

Check ya pours Tek, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
Your rhyme's discrete, your verse is Gonna Be HALF ASSED, Like Sisqo yo gay life is iNcomplete/
eh... ok i guess, stretched again though and the wordplay in the first line could have been better


clear winner: deadly vision.. he had originality, actual punches and even though some of them missed they were way better.

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