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Old 05-01-04, 07:51 PM   #9
E Looch
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relic nothin really in that verse but good structure bout all i can say work on harder punchs and personals to get you elvated at first bout all i can really say there was nothin but filler in your verse

jian not shit in your verse but filler you had nothin not even tryin to throw punchs honestly the worst verse ive ever read i think you need to elevate in every category especially word play to help you elevate on some punchs

vote relic but not by much
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