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Old 05-01-04, 07:54 PM   #24
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

alright
both of these verses was cool but
Marv took this-his shit was more complex and his personals and punches
hit harder didnt have much of an opener or closer but your flow made up
for that-liked tha vocab you used to

Con-your shit was nice-flow was there- ok use of vocab
only thing that was holding you back was your punches
they could of hit harder-your opener and closer was ok not tha best

vote=marv


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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759