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Light Weight
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DeLeon:
Flow- your flow was really good... the structure added 2 it...
Punches- you had a couple here and there... and when u did they hit pretty hard...
Personals- you had a hand full of personals all of which hit pretty hard... this was your strongest area in ur battle... espicially
You couldnt smash my shit even if i gave you a ham-mer/ and...
im burin this kid out like tha holocust so you can call me hitler/
Vocab- pretty complex vocab... very good from ur side...
Originality- i would have to say ur lines were pretty original... played out well over all 8/10...
Beggining and End: you started strong and kept it that way throught the battle...
S.Carter
Flow- flow was good/ok... ur structure wasn't that good so i didn't really add anything 2 it...
Punches- ok u had a few... the few that u had didn't hit that hard... pretty weak...
Personals- u had some personals the ones that u did have were pretty good... espicially...
Who colder S.Carter But kid dont get me confuse with hova
You couldn't make it to the top even if you stood on my shoulders
Vocab- vocab wasn't to complex but there was some good vocab ocassionally...
Originality- a couple of ur lines were original... over all ok verse... i would say 7/10
Beggining and End: you started off strong and in the last 4 verses u lost it...
Winner: DeLeon
mainly because of his complex vocab and his personals and punchlines hit alot harder
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