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Yung...u had better structure....u didnt really have any hard hitting punches....u had rhyme scheme.....flow was ok.....verse score on a scale of 1 to 10 is 3....need to elevate.....
dawg....fix up ya structure....didnt have any punches.....flow sucked.....jus go to tutorials and werk on ur ish.....i cant tell u anything else cept elevate....yung had the betta versebut i wasnt that great...
BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE
Vote - yung

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