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strini got this shit shady your lines are way to stretched you need to work on your structure and shorti nyour lines an that shti will help all off your flow an bring out your punchs instead of reading them 3 times to find it an strini you had nice wordplay and some good and bad punchs but it flowed well even though soem of your lines were stretched to just work on less filler and bringin hard punchs consistently

vote strini

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