Yo my votes goes to Strini heres y

Strini- your verses flowed way better together than Shadys. You had some meta's and you also had some coo punchlines.. I liked the way you got on his Rapper too.
You had pretty good vocab could work on ur personals and adding more metas but other than that good job.

Shady- was feelin ur a verse a lil in the beginning but near the end structure and everything fell off. you went from doing 2 line rhymes to 1 which made it really hard to read. you didnt really through no hard punches but i can c u threw in soem personals though. So all i gotta say is elevate ur vocab throw in more metas and harder hittin punches.

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