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Old 05-01-04, 09:06 PM   #15
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shady....fix ya structure....werk on not stretchin lines...it fucks up ya flow.....keep werkin on personals.....punches u really need to focus on.....jus elevate....use meta's too cuz they help ur creativity and punches.....up ur vocab cuz elementary style dont get u anywhere.....

strini......first off keep elevatin ur punches...u had betta ones than shady......use more meta's.....werk on multi's....ya flow was sick.....good structure....u had the better verse....

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