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Old 05-01-04, 09:32 PM   #30
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fairly bad bad but i give it to young mike

young- your verse was better but lacked skill and punches..work on ur metas adn elevate on the vocab...you got the flwoin process down just work off that adn keep practicin...also make ur lines less simple n more intersting

Killa-you verse lacked skill as well..no punches u and young mostly tried to go off personals and it wasnt happening 4 u this time.. Both of you have the flow part down and can madly elevate if u keep practicin.. work on ur metas, punches, maby add wordplay and multis too.. also elevate the vocab... i know it seems like a lot but just watch

so my vote=Young mike
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