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Old 05-01-04, 09:45 PM   #12
E Looch
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akademiks got this even though his structure is off bad he had nice punchs and didnt used played out recyled lines but you need to work on your structure badly and peter pan waht a name you need to get creative and use better wordplay if you want your punchs to coem out better
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