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Old 05-01-04, 09:46 PM   #7
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Shady:

Flow - ok ur flow was really good...

Punches - you had a couple of punches and the ones u had didn't hit all that hard...

Personals - ok you had a few personals here and there but the ones that u did have hit pretty hard... this was ur best area in the battle... espicialls
Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/

Vocab - you've got a pretty good vocab... u used pretty good wording...

Originality - some of ur lines were original... played out pretty good... over all 7/10


Discharge:

Flow - u had really good flow... ur structure was good aswell which added 2 ur flow

Punches - you had a bunch of punchlines and they hit really hard... this is one of ur better areas... espicially
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
your lyrics wouldnt be heavy if u gave them cement shoes,this battle was a"joy cruise"//

Personals - you had a good amount of personals... the ones that u had were extremly good... this would have 2 be ur best area in this battle... espicially
and your girl even hate you cuz your dick is as small as a sefety-pin//
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//

Vocab - you had increadiable vocab from ur half... great usuage of words...

Originality - most of ur lines were pretty original... played out well... over all 8.5/10

Winner: Discharge
because his personals and punchlines hit alot harder... and he used much more complex vocab....
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