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shady you started off good and then kept fallin off the further and further your verse got work on staying consistent with your punchs and personals and keep your rhyme scheme goin and try to add atleast a lil bit wordplay

discharge kinda the opposite your punchs stayed consitent as you went never realy did fall of but you did have some filler lines overall a pretty good verse nice shit just work on better personals and harder punchs

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