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Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/
naa...wack
You should just quit.....your raps more annying than a orchestra pit/
U couldn't catch with a mit,install-a-toilet kit,nor hawk-and-spit/
nope
So what make you think u can rhyme,it just a waste-of-time/
So I'm a tell you ahead-of-time,that u should head to checkout-line/
decent...
And get back to ur pittiful life,of shaving your balls with a table knife/
Where you have an invisible wife,where it's not man-and wife/
2nd line stated the same thing
But instead wife&cowife,and where you get picked on by ur peers/
So go watch cheers............ and jerk off to Britney Spears/
not workin
Then you shop at SEARS.....wit that retarted mom&dad that u got/
And watch TOM&Jerry..............but can't understand the plot/
just gay

Your verse was boring....u jus stated the gayest shit....elevate on punches....use personals.....go to tutorials cause thats the way u r gonna elevate....

you 2-9 by know u should kno u cant beat me or even get your 3rd win//
ill play your ass like a violen,and break you like that wall in berlin//
played
and your girl even hate you cuz your dick is as small as a sefety-pin//
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//
not hard hitting
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
u battle me bitch i daze and confuse,and your weak ass rhymes fail to amuse//
gettin better
your lyrics wouldnt be heavy if u gave them cement shoes,this battle was a"joy cruise"//
ill throw you some clues, this is the biggest ass beatin ever,put that one the world news//
na
i have really bad news,youve just been murdered by this lyrical"psyhco"//
good news,i saved lots money on my car insurrance by switchin to geicko//
haha

Vote - discharge....he had a couple punches...sum multis....good flow....the closer was funny.....nice spit but keep elevatin cuz u got werk to do....