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Old 05-01-04, 10:29 PM   #10
E Looch
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u thought u had the talent to come and beat me wit ya half ass lyrics//
thought u was a big man and so u dropped ur guard and yet no one could hear it//
sayin this is aint a game but ur verse is just childs play to me//
testin me to erupt is tha wrong choice but ima let u slide but ima leave u wit a burn in tha 3rd degree//
gettin another loss to add to ur record will come wit ease just let me release the venom in me//
now u will see how sic i can be cuz i can make tis GUY become a muff diVER but he wont be a survivor against tis god mc//
tha only thing tats a way of life for u is enden up on the recievin end of a decapitatin punch//
ur punches arent connectin cus ur lines r tied up so quit feedin me ur shit cuz i already had ur ass for lunch//
hes just a lightweight goin against a heavyweight but he cant hold the weight so just fall back and give up tryin to be a giant//
acceptin tis match up was tha worst mistake u made u shouldve been told but u would have been defiant//

nice drop but ya lines are to streched work on takin some words that arent needed out of ya shit to make ya punch sound better and it willl flow a whole lot better

and guyver that was atiny verse that didnt really pack any punchs it was just plain didnt have much of nothin in there not a very good drop just keep elevatin an dropin you might get better
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