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Old 05-01-04, 10:59 PM   #31
E Looch
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gkillaz nice structure good flow average punchs and multies still need to wrok on your vocab and creativity hel pyou ewlvate and make your ppunchs hit harder cause dotn nobody see em comin and try workin on personals those are alwas good

kdogg your structure was everywhere you never really got your flow goin right with strtched lines then back to short lines threw of almost all of your punchs to me just elvat e i nvocab also and try tightin up your strucutre that should help with punchs
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