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Old 05-01-04, 11:03 PM   #15
E Looch
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jay_dogg? anotha' wanna be emcee, to flee the streets of the D/
get down on you're knees, ...quick, you're new names iced tea, ...bitch/
you're a golf tee g an' the world's the ball, weighin' on you're back makin you fall/
oh, i have the perfect gift for you, honest it's ace, it'l go down nice with you're face/
a paper bag to hide you're face, we need to erase every trace of this ugly discrace/
an' you dont have to mind losin' you're mind, cos you need one to start/
that's why you're words are intertwined, you need at least a part, to chart this fine art/
this rap gqme is mine, i dine sippin' wine from a divine shrine assigned.../
...assigned to me, the meanest MC, can you see that i glow with glee/
you're just another homo fag, a pus-sucking slag, who is tagged/
you're tagged so you momma can keep tabs on you/
you'd get dragged if you left you're crib, you'd be beaten black an' blue/

decent verse some lines to far stretched but had some good wordplay an decent vocab an punchs and personals lol good drop just continue to elvate and jay dogg your lines was hti an miss badly miss when the ydid lines was overstretched GET RID OF THE FILLER SHIT that would help you a lot stay consitetn wit hard punchs
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