Heavy Lies The Crown
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This was a good battle.neither verse followed any type of structure both verses just blindly rambled from begginning to end. But someone's goota win.
Kl!K...you had alot of wordplay an multies but you failed to put any personals or any strong punches in there, it was a good verse but a weak battle post. Next time focus more on making your punches harder, an put some personals in there
Cythis...your verse was kinda weak in spots, but the punches you had hit hard, an you got some wordplay in there, any thing I'd say is that you make your verse consistent, making it hit hard through out, nice battle, Stay up!
Vote: Cythis
basically hew said al lthat needed to bee said up your strucutres and that might help ya flow out kids
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A Queer That Voted On my Battles Constently
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think this is one of those things where you understand what your saying, but other people dont
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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote
some people that are mods on here
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