Once I start I'm going to leave in dismay, Your going to get blown away/1
I'll still give you the chance before I go out an advance/2
NO PUNCH..
I'm like kids bop once you start you just can't stop; I throw you into a trance/3
You're still a kid trying to fight in a man's war dance/4
gay...
I think your for real but your just a wigger and don't know how to deal/5
Get ready to squeal cuz you just had your last meal/6
naaa..

Ok this verse was weak like whoa....flow was off cuz lines were stretched....fix that....need to use personals....get punches...use meta's....get better rhyme scheme and vocab....and wordplay needs werk...

Aight well you really wanna battle, then I'll give you a test//1
To see if your a worthy challenge, or should I throw you a vest//2
its ok..
To protect you from dis glock, the bullets made out of lead//3
Fuck shootin your chest, I'll fuckin shoot at your head//4
na...
I'm the lyrical master, my lines tighter than plaster//5
You barely have a chance, now this is your time to advance//6
didnt rhyme...

Ok this verse was also very weak...but ur opener was the best bar of the hwole battle so u get the win...but work on punches.....and u had better flow....use personals....and meta's.....

EACH EMCEE NEED TO ELEVATE

Vote - prophet

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