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Old 05-01-04, 11:35 PM   #8
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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well triple n:
opener good: it was hott This mothafuckas pussy, scared to go first, so now he's gon fall
Too big a wussy to depurse, even if his "mom was spalding" he wouldn't have "balls"
althpugh the scond line was a lil stretched i give him 9/10 on the opener

body:His name's in red, but the title he bares makes him a bold-faced liar
Born2spit, Shit! this fag blows more heads than blow dryers
^^^ that shit was hott
Its sad this bitch actually believes his shit about being the best
He from tennesse, he wasn't born2 spitt, he was "born from incest"
^^good hillbilly/imbreading jokes haha i was feelin dat^^
so u get 9/10 on tha body
closer:I didn't have to rehearse to place him on a hearst, your thru
An whats worse, is everything said in this verse everyone knew
What! you confused, here let me make it clear
^^^it was ok but i wasnt feeling it as much but it didnt ruin your verse cuz by this time u already one"
i give u 7-10 on the closer
overall 25/30 good job
ok born2spit
opener:Im Like Dicks In Womens Vaginas, You Gonna "Feel Me" Inbetween//
I Could Fall Asleep In This Battle, But Triple N Still Couldnt Kill Me In My Dreams//
it was ok but u gotta come out firen!! not this ok opener u get7/10
your body:But keep tryin Cuz Im Leaving You Fucked Like Colorado Women Sleepin With Black Athletes//
You Winning? It Wont Happen, Like Mexican Gurls bein born With Fat Ass Cheeks//
wasnt feelin this not good uve done better
the Triple N battle, now he thinkin he's a bomb threat//
but all he is, is punches... without ANY lyrical content//
^^pretty hott
ll Put Three Gunz In Ya Mouth and Wont' Hesitate To Let It Off//
You Could Dress Up Like "Queen Latifah" Build a Bomb And Still Couldnt "Set It Off"//
^^that was ok but not great^^
overall 7/10
closer:
I Slump Minds With Punchlines, Listen Son..Your Future's Sad//
I'll Make This Dude Disappear Like The Weight Missy Used To HAve//
that shit was fuckin hott propz on dat overall 9/10

overall 23/25
hott battle but triple n came harder with punches sorry born 2 spit!!
v/triplen
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