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Old 05-01-04, 11:45 PM   #24
E Looch
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gambino merked him even though his bars started off way to stretched he gathered it up an got flow back an came with sum hard ass punchs straight to the point but ya vocab lacked and so did ya wordplay try elvatin in that area nice drop though

killuminatic you had good strucutre nice flow in it but didnt se no good punchs from you and you also need to elevate on your vocab and wordplay and try to work more punchs and personals in your verse and stay consistent with them
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