spiky:


i see yo name jokah its more like me playn a
game of pokah/
its more your da joke and i'm da pranksta caus
i'll show that i'm a gangsta/
-not a very good start
or i just might keep go'n n go'n like a durecell
battery/
i hope i win this caus i just wasted my time
try'n to rhyme against u/
so what i'm do /
-the ending screwed ur chance of winning...
okay overall u was wack.. u had no consistent flow and ur structure sucked ass.. ur rhymes arent good either'

Da Jokah:
i dont wanna fuck up dis lil nigga and get charged for underage shit//
and ya mom been round da block and nigga she got a undapayed clit//
-nice start, even tho i think its a bit forced
and iam a make dis nigga like LOSTCHILD and make up a crew to vote for him//
this nigga is so pussy he gettin his home boiz to toke for him//
-another nice one, seems a little forced
fuckin bitch u probably jus gettin ya wet dreams//
aight here we go ..u da rookie iam da vet..QUEENZ//
-weak ending.. but its all u need

jokah stayed consistent till he got to the end.. but its more than wut spiky had... jokah also came hard wit some punches.. vote=jokah

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