Thread: deleon VS GOTTA
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Old 05-02-04, 12:37 AM   #2
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From: TeNNeSSee
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Deleon:
tellin us to respect ya mind, nigga respect my dick/
just like i repect my trigger finger, you best respect when it twitch/
-nice start
you spit these half ass multis and think you can scoot by on somethin easy/
im readin ya rhymes and nick namin ya kraft, cuzz boy dis niggas cheesy!/
-shit that was a nice closer..

overall deleon u stayed wit ya flow, good strucutre, and great punches.. the only thing u lacked was wordplay

gotass:
U Picked The Wrong Battle Dawg U Bout To Get Bested/
Ur The Lil Nigga Thats Bout To Get Jacko Style Molested(no Homo)/
-nice start
overall thats the best line u had.. the rest i just wasnt feelin.. u tended to slip a bit but ill let that slide, ur structure was average and ur punches were average..

vote=deleon


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