This Bitch is a dumbass I see why he took so long.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121653 he spelled my fuckin name wrong
[ you had a good idea here but this didnt flow together at all...could have hit alot harder]
This bitch is a Pycho he Think his battles goin to get him big....
But bitch Watch me becuz im about to put out the fire on ya sig....
[weak punch, pretty simple]
Nose picker if he found a treasure he would eat it like if it was a bugger...
IM dangerous becuz im goin to ripp ya so much you can call me Freddy Krauger
[weak.... what is a bugger?]
The nigga is winnin by battlin newbs..To me hes a fuckin test.....
When I get done you goin to need a replacement jaw like Kanye West...
[ok i dont get this you say hes only winning battles with newbs... and hes actually giving u a test???? .... idunno]
True Im nasty I would nutt on ya mom and she would tell you its frost...
But nigga if ya think you ever go to stay winnin well ya just lost
[weak closer... not even a punch]
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Ill let me kepp it real, your gangsta style won't work//
Your rhymes are so boring i didn't even read your whole verse//
[ ok opener... ok punches too]
Ill I look at ya rhymez and i outta-laugh//
nigga i drop so much bombs osama asked for my autograph//
[ kinda funny... osama lines are played tho]
This phony is still on gay shit, I shouldn't turn my back//
He might like it too much and think that Im wack//
[pretty weak here coulda made it hit alot harder]
Yea Ill I Know U Got Hope//
But Then U Woke Up And Said" Du Du Du Du Dats All Folks!"//
[ didnt really get this here??...]
Ill u rap like a fucking nazi//
Nigga ur raps r more boring than yahtzee//
[ weak punch, off flow]
Punches- True
Flow- ILL
Enjoyment- ILL
Content- True
Multies- True [only 1]
Vocab- neither
Structure- ILL
VOTE- TrueKilla.... this was a pretty weak battle.... both need to elevate..... multies and wordplay will come with practice but true won this with a few better punches.... Your flow was really off tho... try evening up your lines.... Neither had vocab or much multies... ILL you killed with the flow but none of ya punches were really at him cept the kanye line but thats played like monkeybars at recess... I seen you come harder in other battles.... just keep at it