This kid just got on the forum already tryin to Diss [Rappers]
You need luck to touch me like the Manhattan [Jaspers]
um... this a whack line. the jaspers didn't win it all
Your weak disses dont evan touch Poeple u should [Get-Some-Advice]
Ima Hit u with these Cold Flows and watch u [Sit-On-Ice]
um.. no
Im hitten u with my Eyes closed and 1 hand behind my [Back]
Im Knocken u harder then Jevon Kerse on a QB [Sack]
eh...
You need a Sledge hammer to Break my Untouchable [Destruction]
Im here bitch u fell me i dont need a Formal [IntroDuction]
hmm... no
7?whats that for the number of bars it took me to [Smash-You]
It didnt take much thought for me to step up and [Bash-You]
ok at least this was a personal. it was not great though


Beat 7?.. Dreams Come True But Ya Wish Wont..Try Ta 'Handle' 7 And Get Ya Wrists Broke
wtf is this structure? mad stretched
...Red Like Reverse Crips Yo..An Its Sad Ya Verse Was Nothin But Played Lines An Piss Jokes
his verse had no piss jokes..
...It's True Too!...
no its not
...Look In Tha Mirror Ta See Whose Tha Worst Kidd..Get Placed In a Hearst Bitch
...And Even Worse Shit Is That I Spit 2 Bars An Had More Punches Than Ya Whole Verse Did
hearse, not hearst. did and bitch don't rhyme.
...Damn!...
...Ropes Meet Tha Noose Wit Ya Head Queer..Pussy!..We All Knew Ya Bled Fear
...Fuck Haters!..Im 'Shakin Hat Off' Like Doin That Harlem Move Wit Loose HeadGear!
right... ok meta i guess.. but you gotta punch!
...*Harlem Shake*...
...But Humor Aside..Compare Ta Me Ya Trash When Tha Rumors Subside..7's Fluent Wit Lines
...-N Ya Said It Yaself Kidd... You'd Even Say a Whack Verse Was Hott If You Knew It Was Mine
huh?
...Ha-Ha!...
...The Sad Part About This Battle Is You Rap Like A Newbie... Battlin' Lucky Will Have You End Like Black Guys In Movies.
bleh


ok, two bad verses. i would recommend you guys stick to just straight punches. stop this "ill kill you" or "my punches" rule stuff... just do punches. use metas.. like "your mom sucks as much as a vacuum" (<-- just an example, please never use something that bad). elevate big time. oh and first guy wins because second guys verse annoyed me by using personals that weren't true. that's whack.

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