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Old 05-02-04, 08:30 AM   #23
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for adebisi:

flow:good job nothing wrong here 7/10

volcab:alright not the best i've seen but good job 6/10

punches:some nice personals not too many lines overall but still pretty strong what you had my fav,"When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life"6/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for vango:

flow:i thought it could of been better it was kinda choppy through most of it 5/10

volcab:good use specially threw the first half difenatly better then your oppenent 7/10

punches:some alright lines here not too many and a couple were kinda played but good job best line,"So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike" ha ha ha funny anyway 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--vango slightly better verse
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league