breakdown for L.I.:
flow:alittle off in spots in the middle of the verse but for the most part good job 6/10
volcab:good use worked through the verse helped some of the imagery well too, 7/10
story:it was good you stayed on topic the whole thing and it was pretty orginal kinda predictable though i'd of liked to see more twists and turns but good job none the less 7/10
overall:20/30
breakdown for lock:
flow:striaght basic but no off spots good job 7/10
volcab
retty basic i'd expect alittle better then this 5/10
story
retty much a usually story you'd expect to come along with this topic nothing special try harder in this department next topical 5/10
overall:17/30
vote--good battle pretty close but my vote is for L.I.