Jay Dogg easily took that one...fine mind that structure and rhyming was wack...you need to seriously elevate. Jay Dogg this was easy for you but you need to come bette also. Your punches could have been harder. Nice flow though.
Rhymes:Jay Dogg
Structure:Jay Dogg
Punches: fine mind (he was a bit more creative)
multies: none
Overall: Jay Dogg
Vote on this link now peeps...I need to close this one (honest votes though)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624