Originally Posted by E Looch

L.I Can Write Bars On His Forehead an couldnt Make Head-Lines/
Could Pass For Bustas Aerobics Instructor way ya Stretch-Rhymes/
Tries at wordplay... lil too straightforward... but no completely bad (dont-do-this)
Lines Requirin Higher Court Rooms L.I considers my Verse-Appealin/
The Type to Cripple Ya Sense of Touch jus to Hurt-Ya-Feelins/
Not good... kind of cliche....
Double Dutchin wit Gats as Ropes Kuniva quit Jumpin-The-Gunz-B/
Tradin Bars With You Like Laxatives bet i give you a Run-for-ya-Money/
Not good.... and the hyphens are getting old real fast
Ponderin-Stats Complexity's Dilemma Fuck A Beene no Quandary-Raps/
Scared to Throw in the Towel like Paranoid Peeps in Laundrymats/
Incredibly played... most people use a hindu line there though
Got L.I Sweatin Bullets Perspirin Shells through His Skin-Pores/
Kunivas battlin Wit Alzheimers he dont know What Hes In-For/
Not good.... work on wording and fresher concepts
Even If Kuniva Had saL.Iva Couldnt Spit Hot Shit If He Refined It/
Put Out Of Order Signs on yalls Brain To prove yall Closed-Minded/
You keep using the same type of punch... switch it up
Admit Defeat Scared To Come Out Ya Shell like Shook Terrapins/[turtles]
Dressed The Odds Of Victory In Lean Clothes Ya Chances Wearin Thin/[think kids]
No.............
Moron i Aint Losin Kuniva Sharkin Names Nothin But A Meek-Biter/
Your vo'CAB' is rollin on "flats" i think you better RE-TIRE/(retire)
Played... I used a re-tire line last year
Weak Faggots Like Kuniva Get Their Persona's-Faded/
Write 'Wednesday in Punctuations' So Ya Loss Is A-Comma-'Dated'/(accomodated)
Nah.... your punches arent connecting very well
Looch got the "Element" of battle while you continue to 'Bore-On'/[boron]
like "Dummies Usin Facial Cleansers" L.I's merely an 'Oxy-Moron'/
Very weak meta
Strike Kunivas Vision Wit Precise Incisions Despite Predictions/
Got This "Pussy Fearin My Bars" Like Paranoid Dikes In Prisons/
Nah... weak meta again
How L.I Gonna Flow When Im Cloggin Ya System Like A Blood Clot/
Tryna Get Ya Brain On Track But Im Wreckin Ya Train Of Thought/
not bad..... work on wording though
Couldnt Make Not 1 Top 10 List And Now Kuniva Wanna Get Upset/
And Like Careless Tight Rope Walkers Ya Career Depends On The Net/
Not bad... weak meta though... dont make your metas obvious
Just Leave These Fake Rappers Motionless Like A Manicin/
L.i Readin My Verse Hyperventalatin Hopelessly And Panicin/
Nah... no real punch here
Knowin A Win Is Uncontrolable Like Addin To His Pokemon Collection/
I Think Ya Face Is The Reason Ya Parents Started Usin Protection/
Played... not a good punch... just blah
Except It You flows sound all the same like The voice of Ben Stein/
I'll Put Ya Spine On A Calender And Place Ya Back-Into-Time/
Back in time punches are incredibly played


help on that??