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Light Weight
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IP:
Justin:
Flow - ur flow was really good it was betta than Jay B... ur structure was pretty good aswell
Punches - u didn't have that many... but the ones u had didn't really hit hard...
aint talkin basketball when i give this guy a "tech" and his "shots" are still missin//
that was sorta weak...
Personals - i would say ur personals were pretty good hit pretty hard... one of ur best points in dis battle...
now listen Inversry; quit free postin, ill bag u like groceries//
u couldnt get bit off if ya ass was fresh poultry//
those were good personals...
Vocab - i would say u got average vocab... cuz the words u used were pretty basic
Originality - i would say 2 or 3 of ur lines were original the others were pretty basic, but played out good... overall 7.5/10
begining and end:
yo started strong and ended strong but the main probublem was that there wern't enough punchlines and the ones u had didn't hit hard enough... also in the middle u fell apart but then at the end u pulled it 2 gether...
Jay B:
Flow - i would say ur ryhmes flowed but not as good as justin's... structure was good aswell but try 2 make ur words ryhme more...
Punches - almost every line had a punchline that would knock justin off his feet... this was by far ur best point in the battle...
..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..||
..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..||
those were ur best punchlines and they hit really hard...
Personals - had a couple but just like ur punchlines hit increadably hard... especially
..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..||
..My Verse = Straight Illness An Peeps Will 'Vote-On-Mine'.. Ya Can't Advance If Ya 'Coat-Ya-Rhymes'..||
Vocab - vocab was pretty complex... ur usage of words was pretty good... but some times a couple of ur words didn't ryhme...
Originality - most of ur lines were original around 4-5 of them were... and all of which were well played out... overall 9/10
Begging and End: Started strong and stayed strong though out...
Winner: Jay B
because he had more punchlines and personals and all of them hit alot harder... i thought this line won him the battle...
..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..||
also he had a much more complex vocab
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