heres my breakdown:

shady:

Nigga,you call urself ILL............like you've never been near A dolllar bill/
Make ur mom wish she taken those abortion pills or gotten killed/
^^first line made no sense but second line was nice ok opener 6/10
My raps are hot,cause I got the magic potion,while yours cold like artic ocean/
All my raps cause a huge commotion.....yours seem to go in slow motion/
^^nice wordplay and multies some filler 6/10
You in text,cause u talk like a asthma attack,after one line you hit a fatigue crack/
So for you to talk...............you gotta give a giant warning of attack/
Because of all the bacterial plaque,which gives everyone a heart attack/
^^worst bar u used attack 3 times ok wordplay but bad bar 3/10
Battling me is like going to detention,except when you leave,you gon get pension/
Because you gonna become handicapped,while ur papa's cum's on ur lap/
^^another dumb bar wasnt feelin this...u got skill but didnt show it 4/10
Cause you see.........Being retarted is less embarrising as ur family tree/
Your whole raps aren't worth a Pakistani rupree,I'd win this by saying "A.B.C"/
^^ ok closer good wordplay once again 6/10

overall: 25/50


ill:

You cant even spell my name right..so lets stop and pause..
This bitch is wack and I get more hoe hoe hoes than santa clause
^^il opener had a punch and a personal in there nice 7/10
Shady man uppins uppins for more of dicks.....
But bitches rhymes is soft and packed together like Deoderant sticks
^^lol another nice punch feelin it 6/10
All he talk about is how he goin to be in the future is so seen...
Nigga you so stupid I can robb you blind and say im ur cousin Ugean..
^^good first line second line was wack 4/10
Hes a homo goth nigga he gets more butts shined than the sun....
You faggot you want to be a girl so more breast inplants than pamela anderson
^^ok punch nothing too good 5/10
Dont battle me again,be smart dont do drugs and dont be in dangers...
Nigga you just lost so go home and dont talk to strangers..
^^ lol a good closer nice bar 6/10

overall: 28/50


vote: ill.....good shyt from both but ill took this one with harder punches..shady had better wordplay and multies but ill had a better verse overall

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