Ur the King?More like the Bitch of the [Palace]
My Mic as my weapon hitten u harder then a [Malace]<--old weapon
ok... decent.
Your Name suits u cause ur rhymes are old like the [Midevil]
You Spit like a Wench U call urself the King its [Unbelivable]
um.. you really could have done more with that set up line.. the second line didn't have that much to do with the first
Ur rhymes come out like a Kid throwin [Stones]
Im shootin off catapults leavin u in [Bones]
you dont leave someone "in bones"
Your Flow blows more then a Pregnant [Chick]
If this was Basketball ud shoot nothin but [Bricks]
ok.. kinda played metas but at least you are using them.. now you have to develop them more so they sound more original, use wordplay, etc...
I just Destroyed U and ur Enitre Lyrical [Court]<--old word
Well i sent u on a Futuristic ride to hell andu cant [Abort]
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This ReLiC got no winz, he’s startin a brand new rap class
He got zero skillz, his rapper got more victories than he has
haha... nice
And wat bout ure sig, how u gone camouflage sumthin u aint got
Ure ass would probably get more flow if I sewed ure mouth shut
ok personal, second line decent
I’m a load up this 12 gauge then ure forehead I’ll ‘X’ to mark it
Cock-that-shit, pop-that-shit after I hang u up for a human target
akward wording for a forced rhyme... bleh
Shit this cud be Scooby-Doo cuz I’m about to solve this mystery
I’m gonna expose this bitch and make him a tru ReLiC of history
i like the name bit
This bitch so dumb he whipped out his dick when I said draw ure 9mm [millimetre]
There ain’t no dickridin bitch, now I’m gonna have to kill-a-cheater
played bit on the 9mm dick, but decent i guess
How u even gonna expect to beat me wit rhymes so generic
I show no mercy when I rip the shit out of this ancient ReLiC
ok, not much here, not your best line
When I’m thorugh I’ll have ure ass beggin for a paramedic!!
bah.. i dont like 3 lines for one rhyme, and this isn't a great closer


ok royal wins for having a really nice start, even if he fell off. relic, you are elevating, which is good, but you have to start going with personals - check proflies, check sigs, work with names, etc. you had the palace theme going on.. but you didn't do much with it. work on getting your setup lines and punches to string together better.

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