i changed my title !!
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IP:
breakdown for crazy one:
flow:good job outside of the first couple of bars big improment over last week 6/10
volcab:alright still kidna basic but your getting better 5/10
punches: still not too many lines at yung duke best,"when actually this fool is like B-Rad from malibu's most wanted/" again though you are getting better 6/10
overall:17/30
breakdown for yung duke:
flow:good job nothing really wrong with it a couple of bars got a little streched but 7/10
volcab:nice job here some of the best in the league this week nice to see you showing up again you beat your oppenent here 8/10
punches:mainly talking bout yourself too much here not enough against crazy try harder at directing punches towards you oppenent more 5/10
overall:20/30
vote--yung duke
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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