i changed my title !!
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IP:
breakdown for kingz:
flow:no off spots solid all the way through good job 7/10
volcab:nice for the most part again no problems here 7/10
punches:some real good lines good job at addressing shadow through the whole peice best line,"You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" 7/10
overall:21/30
breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:nice job no problems here 7/10
volcab:kinda below kingz i thought still alright just down abit 6/10
punches:nothing too much no use of the words in the punches and really nothing but played topcis and shit that just wasn't seeming to be hitting try harder next week 5/10
overall:18/30
vote--kingz ran away with this good verse you surprised me
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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