Fine mind...you had a classic newb verse, you had no punches, no set ups, no personals, no wordplay, no creativity, weak vocab, decent structure, an it flowed alrite but that the only positive of whole verse.

Discharge...I can see you didn't try very hard but you had one punch that won it, that was the anna nicole line, nice punch, the rest was weak, but you at least had a battle verse, weak but present punches, good flow, good structure, thats about it, needs work, respect
Flow: Dis
Structure: Dis
Punches: Dis
Those are really only things to vote on, weak battle
Vote: Discharge

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