i don't care bout being a few minutes late as long as your verse or check in is in the thread the next morning when i close them your fine anyway back to the vote:
breakdown for lman_1528:
flow:best part of your verse good job here no problems with it 7/10
volcab:basic use nothing special like you weren't trying or somehting 5/10
punches:same here as the volcab you didn't really seem to try too much nothing real direct and hittin i thought try harder next week 4/10
overall:16/30 i've seen better from you
breakdown for accomplishment:
flow: good job not the best i've seen from you but you've rebounded from last week's loss well 7/10
volcab
retty good could of been stronger your not seeming to have put too much effort into this 6/10
punches:best line wasn't even really a punch at him,"underestimating what you hardly saw...cuz i'm showin up like tits at mardi-gras..." i just liked it some alright actually punches too 6/10
overall:19/30
vote--accomplishment good to see you in the winning column again