Okay this looks like a great match up so ima do a bar by bar breakdown...
u steppin into da wrong place,yo lyrics about 2 be demolishing.........
ill wrap a easy victory,while u juss disappear like david robinson.........
decent opener...ok meta...7/10
yo damn spits off balanced and cook eyed jus like yo sig gunz..........
u want some more i already beat yo ass 5 votes 2 juss 1..........
Personal....good...8/10
u aient goin wanna uppin juss hope readers a pass by this.........
spit flames and make u CREAMATE back to the black hole(FROM)
didnt rhyme...but like the lil meta...6/10
nigga u gone wit the wind cuz u juss instantly got blew........
u jus another fake creation jus like yo Rapperz DaMu.......
hahaha...9/10
u can be saidens son and u still we neva be hott.........
u a clown killa bowy should put u as LD mascot........
nice closer...8/10
Verse Score :
38/50
Okay this was a pretty decent verse...wasnt great but wasnt horrible....u had sum personals....good punches....but 3rd bar didnt rhyme....that fucked up the flow.....its straight tho....
Lmao y0 h0w u figure ya rhymes can harm-me___
when i can smash ya wh0le team s0l0 i d0nt need da fuckin arm-y__
Not a big punch....not that great of an opener...5/10
warri0r?? pls i'll aim and give u head-sh0ts___
and besides ya l0cati0n,when im wit ya girl dats da 0nly time the bed-r0ck__
nice nice...8/10
ya fl0ws camouflaged kuz u hiden ya gh0st-rider___
and u 0nly 0n a team kuz u a g00d nutt-rider___
aint feelin it...4/10
u aint cl0se ta better then me,pls st0p-it___
kuz im kn0w imma get this win wit predicti0ns like a pr0-phet___
No punch....4/10
u s0 gassed i bet ya gay l0ver spits hel-ium___[think]
and mailN ya rhymes 0n k0daks da 0nly way his b0ys feelin-em___[think]
A lil betta...6/10
Verse Score :
27/50
Aight first off dont stretch ya lines....it fucked up ya flow....u only had one good bar....ur other bars didnt even have punches....i expected for you to do better....but u didnt come hard wit punches and thats why choppa got this...
Vote - choppa
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