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Old 05-02-04, 04:48 PM   #8
BoRn2SpiTT
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From: TeNNeSSee
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Find mind:
ur rap wasnt good at all.. it was wack man.. and u had multies but ur strucutre and rhymes lacked.. u have to comebine multies along wit ur strucutre bro..

Discharge:
looks guys! im batteling unknown a.k.a. fine mind and hes about to get fried //
good rhymes are what you cannot provide,so you will be left behind//
-nice start
then u kept on goin really well... ur style was good too.. overall u was good