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Old 05-02-04, 05:14 PM   #23
PoLiFicK
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nice drop da both of u

da S- uhad some ok shit nice punches

bestline-Madman think he's a gangsta he's had too much of tha bottle(Beer)
He killed my family?(lol) wake up kid you're playin Grand theft auto

nice start

worsteline-none

nice drop overall yo verse gets a 7.4/10

madman-nice vocab usage i liked yo flow

bestline-Yo, I spit lines that'll make ya bones collapse/
Anihilate ya hope, put you into medical relapse/

nice start

worsteline-none

overall yo verse gets a 7.3/10 both verse was good but the opener got me and solution had a betta 1 by jus a lil bit

vote da solution
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