okay then,Choppa had the better flow/structure because CREAM had strected lines.I hat to see long lines,and then short.I wasn't feeling the opener &closer in both threads.Neither of you had wordplays or imagery.U guys aren't newbs,you should have it.And off course,punches,which choppa had.
u aient goin wanna uppin juss hope readers a pass by this.........
spit flames and make u CREAMATE back to the black hole(FROM)
^^^ Cream had nutin up to this.