T1: u owned this battle
Vocab and structure:
great vocab packed ur lines wit good wording...
Punchlines
k u had alot of punchlines....... all of which were at a high level... these ones killed CHUCK
Kill u while ur 'Eatin-FROOT-LOOPS' so i can be a 'CEREAL KILLA' //
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//
Personals:
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
those were the best ones u had... i would say good personals from ur side...
Begging and Ending:
your beggining was good and u held it up throughout the battle and ended strong...
Chuck:
Pretty weak battle....... everything u spit was weak and basic vacab, personals, punchlines, originality all were basic and weak... u should practice more...
can't really qoute that much stuff but w.e.
Punchlines and Personals: barely any and the few u had were sorta pathetic...
GAME OVER... but you not lil flip im jus leavin you screwed
you're nuthin-so once i kill you, you wont make the news
those were actually ok lines...
Vocab and structure:
ok ur vocab pretty basic... and ur structure was good... try using more complex words and using bigger ones...
Flow:
ur ryhmes flowed ok... once again u should work on this... but yea ur flow wasn't that bad........ over all 6/10
Winner: T1
because he used alot more complex vocab and he would have 1 the battle wit these 4 lines
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
Kill u while ur 'Eatin-FROOT-LOOPS' so i can be a 'CEREAL KILLA' //
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//
also, Chuck didn't stand much of a chance everything he spit was much 2 basic...