Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//
If tha game was ya "dick", you couldnt "GET UP"on this rap shit//
Youll "never SURPASS my BARS" like "chin-ups from a fat-chick"//
Attendance of sharks, I got this Kid Surrounded' like the Axis-to-the-Earth//
Chuck’ Beatin ME is 'Unheard OF' like the 'Planning-of-his-Birth'//
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//

these 3 lines were better than chuck whole verse. killa ya flow was awesome. nice battle. amazin punches, u came way hard than u need to keep it up

got Pac on ya shit thinkin your flow dat lethal
jus go in a corner sit in a position called fetal
YOU ARE GARBAGE, but dats sumthin i think you already knew
read the name off the i.m.- im NUMBA 1 so take 2

ok lines. very basic tho.
try to improve flow and get some better vocab

v/killa