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Old 05-02-04, 08:08 PM   #3
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Wow! Another lyrical killer! - Just like the 2000 others,
... Fake and laughable, kinda like Warner Brothers ...
haha pretty dope opener...9/10
Posted your pics up and now you're being a tough talker,
In reality, the only person you've popped is Betty Crocker!
Not feelin this...weak punch...4/10
Sure you've elevated from the start, and that's alright,
But your success is fading quicker than Vanna White's.
It's okay...6/10
... Money talks, and you're living proof talk's cheap ....
I'm no vet, but I'll lay you and your dawgs down to sleep.
no big punch here...5/10
It's hard to see when you're in the eye of the storm,
But why should I take your crew seriously...
When you don't even have your own forum?
Nice personal....8/10

Verse Score : 32/50

Yer verse was decent....sustainment wasnt there....but ur opener and closer were dope....keep elevatin on ur meta's cuz they help punches....keep usin personals.....good verse.....keep elevatin cuz ur gettin betta.....

Come On Karl Everyone Knows You Pussy So Im Treatin This Batlle Like Date Rape/
Stab Merks Wit Tru Faith,An Make Yo Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache/
Decent opener...ok punch....7/10
Hes Just In The Company Of "Royal" Illness Like "Stayin With Lords"/
i Will Put karls "Life On The Line" Quick Like Hes "Playin With Cords"/
Nice meta....8/10
Comes In,Shows No Skills At All Like Retard Pieces In Art-Shows/
Heartless Flows Get You Hurt Quick Like Matadors In Red Clothes/
nniiccceee....10/10
Face It U Aint Hot,Just Half Baked Like Dave Chapelle/
Let Yo Carcass Rot, Burnt An Shot In The Back Of A Chevelle/
Not that great...useless multi's...5/10
Now Karl Malone Is Ready To Fall Again Like He Missed A Step/
Throw My Pics In Your Face So You Can Really Picture-Death/
HOT....10/10

Verse Score : 40/50

Okay you verse was pretty dope....the closer either made or broke ur verse and it was hot.....dont use multi's unless they fit in....cause it fucks up the meaning...but u had the betta verse....and u get the win....

yo this was a pretty good battle....both emcees keep elevatin.....cause yall both got skills....

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