yea first of all why did you drop 3? any way
breakdown fo fine mine:
structure 3 /10 needs much work
punches need better work to 6/10
flow 5/10 that structure made your verse ahrd to read\
overall 14/30 way below average
break fown fo tripple n
structure 8/10
punches 9/10
flow 7/10
24/30 much better verse best line:
This a battle, its a slaughter, let me get it ovet wit'
I'm a call u "huggies" cuz ya rhymes are "full of shit"
m vote/ triple

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