let me explain.

rhymes
Dirty Souths Finest, bow down to INS ya heiness, when I shine I am the brightest MC I leave ya lifeless, your spineless, a coward, you a little shack I am a tower, come at me you get devoured, chopped up like cocaine powder, try to match my power, im comin from the east...a beast with a ferocious mind im sharp like wolves teeth, at my peak im a god, at the top of the game, you a lame at your best you couldn't see 3 grand no less, not impressed your talents and name fuck you I bring the pain, my methods are reflected from zeus then manifested with a pen I leave your brain molested, check the votes im selected, elected to the illest, feel this im the realest you a fantasy not reality you ever beatin me is falacy can't beleive you even challenged me on stage you left a casualty, tragically, I rip your esphogaus right out your throat then choke you with your tonsils leave your voice at high notes, sounded like an alien come at me im carryin mic granades with pins battlein any militant advesary bury them on stage, smoke you on a track like your name was purple haze, leave your thoughts in a daze, your words in a maze, can't find their way out cause you know you played out with no comeback to spray out, so just try an escape route, forfeit and hand my pay out, bow down to a greater emcee, who visually already sees the outcome, you fall short like midgits in line for roller coaster rides when the bouts out, put your fuckin lights out, tko you been defeat, go back and learn how to flow your rhymes need to be critiqued, throw your body in shit creek and watch you flow to your death, you came iight but kid theres no way you fuckin with the best, this not a test it is life and in this game I play it trife, I take your wife and your mic and kick you off your own stage when I receit, have you booed right out the arena, you know the procedure, you the student im the teacher like rakim said follow the leader....
yo shit is whack your rhymes are too long and you went pass the time limit.plus i didnt even know when you started and hen you finished a rhyme.

killa

Ill give u a lil taste of my rap cuz I know u thirsty//
Blast-ROCKETS-on-ya-CHEST like a Steve Francis Jersey//
Inspectah ya flow takes elevation quicker than Dough-Spittin-Leaven//
I’ll make Inspectah Spirit Drop like Angels getting Kicked-outta-Heaven//
I’m just spittin HEAT and this kid thinks he's in hell//
Serve u an L,Makin Inspectah Shake like ALI-huggin-a-Richter Scale//
Ya Punches Just 'Don't Work' ~ Its Evident That Rappin Isn't Your Job//
You Just A Fag ~ Whos Hit More Balls Than McGuire And Barry Bonds!//
How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//
Run up against T12U3, no hesitation nigga you get sprayed,//
Only 'Johnson' you are close to is 'Magic', cuz you both got aids//
Got cats to drive me all over the city like i was gettin toured,//
The only 'wealth' you got is next to your monopoly board//
that shit was hott and everything plus you stayed in the limit.
inspected rhymes needs to elevate badly.

How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//

this line had me buggin.

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