yo disscharged ur gonna be dismantled, magled, dangled in any direction/
you spit weak, since your a computer geek, i bet you can't even speak/
NO RHYME...and useless multis....weak punch....2/10
im a lyrisis that will dispense you, then demolish you, haunting/
i'm breathing lerking down ya neck, driving you bizerk/
nope...1/10
I'll startle you and give you a heart seizure, paramedics couldn't save ya/
I'll dig you a big grave to hold the storage of all ya family put together/
wtf?....1/10
I don't speak honest to bitches, im hyronic to the phycotic rippin eye lids off/
You ur 2 scared to face me, i'll come bombing in my car to run u bitch down/
you were lieing dead found, ferenzics on the case couldn't fingure that out/
gay...2/10

Verse Score : 6/40

Okay this verse sucked....get punches....use personals....rhyme scheme <-- learn that....learn everything....

looks guys! im batteling unknown a.k.a. fine mind and hes about to get fried //
good rhymes are what you cannot provide,so you will be left behind//
ok punch...need better wordplay....4/10
see my rhymes are fully aligned, but your an embaressment to all of mankind//
ur unknown but im known world-wide,i give you credit atleast you tried//
ok put all jokes aside all jokes aside,you might get your first win in the year 2009//
weak punch...3/10
your rhymes are just like anna nicholes pussy......just BLOWN//
your rhymes are bitten,mine are home grown,give it up bitch your unknown//
ill leave you left like you were hit by a cyclone,i won,this that is etched in stone//
Not that hard of a punch....3/10
im the king and this is my throne,and your elton jon's clone//
ok newb next time leave your weak rhymes at home// !!!!!!!
aight...4/10

Verse Score : 14/40

Aight your verse was weak but u didnt have to come hard....werk on punches....use meta's and personals...just elevate....

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