breakdown:

lyrical MC:

CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
^^ok opener good 2nd line1st one was ok 6/10
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
^^another ok bar coulda been better 6/10
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
^^good 2nd line 1st one is ok 7/10
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
^^wasnt feelin this felt stretched and forced 3/10
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.
^^good closer 7/10

overall: 29/50

CarsonJetX2:

Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
^^good opener and personal 7/10
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
^^ another good punch and personal 7/10
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
^^hot shyt good multies/wordplay 8/10
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
^^good bar nice shyt 7/10
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....
^^good closer and wordplay 6/10

overall: 35/50

vote:CarsonJetX2 good verse from both but i think carson took this by using hard hittin punches and good wordplay and multies nice verses from both but carson has my vote

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