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Old 05-02-04, 09:13 PM   #13
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Shady wannabe here's 14 years old
He cant get no pussy and so he's been told
weak punch...4/10
everytime he sees a cunt and he trys to get hold
he gets denied and left out in the cold
No punch...2/10
heres some game you can permanently borrow
use it in 5 years when your dicks finished its growth
Not feelin it....3/10
"gimme some pussy" only 50 percent will say no
Oh no, you listen to 50 cent... your both homos
Weak punch....3/10
here's a secret for you, a peice of info
your mother is a cocksucking nasty ass hoe, so
wtf?!....0/10
Remember tonight, when your mum turns out the lights
tucking you in cum drippin from her lips gonna kiss you goodnight
haha thats disgusting and weak....2/10

Verse Score : 11/60

Aight just go to tutorials and learn punches and wordplay....use personals and meta's....ELEVATE...

You call urself ozzy,like you a magican,well I be happy if u dissapear/
Nigga,you couldn't get booked if you were reading William Shakespeare/
Its ok....5/10
Yeah,your'e older than me,yet you got no pubic hair,and chill in daycare/
Nigga,you just the average queer with dreams of becoming a millionaire/
Not that great of a punch...3/10
Are you trying to be Chris Jerchico's fozzy,the band with a wrester in it?/
Only thing you know bout wrestling is ur mom,if I was u,it's suicide I'dcommit/
Needs better word play and better punch....2/10
Anybody fuck with me...............and they end up redder than a maxi pad/
Which to u isn't too bad,cause you got more periods than an Suess story
lol a lil better....5/10
Sorry to end ur morning glory..........but you gonna lose today ozzzy/
No way I'm losing to RB's head nurse,but he gonna come back reimbursed/
Casue he a diverse,instead of gettin better,he keeps gettin worse/
na....3/10

Verse Score - 18/50

Aight still need to elevate....but werk on wordplay and using personals....get sum more meta's in there.....keep elevatin.....

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