Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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ok no nice opener and closer u ahad a good flow ur vocab wsas better than childs but still needs elevation u need 2 come with more personals and multis
child good flow and thats about it ur punches didnt really hit as if the were directed 2 him ur structure needs work vocab does 2 personals and multis ok vese 4 newbs but not against no both could use elevation but i feel no caught the edge with his closer flopw and structure
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O.Y.D.
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